Job application question

Hi everyone. I am applying for a role in a television company in operations. There is one question to answer, which is fairly personal and based off life:

How has your background in life shaped you as an individual and how do you think it benefits you in the role?

I have written out an answer, but was hoping someone could help me further or just give advice on whether it sounds good? I'd be happy to PM it to someone if that's ok.

Thanks!

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