Please read the email I sent to the HR after not getting the job and tell me if I was rude or unreasonable

I applied to two different positions and I got the exact same email for both of them. The email says that I’m “highly qualified” but some other applicants are “more qualified”. However I’m encouraged to apply for different positions at XXXX.

My email back (he said “don’t hesitate to email me back if you have any other question”)

Dear XXXX

I have applied to two different positions at XXXX and I have received the exact same email in response.

I’m working very hard on my career, and I’m in the process of building up the skill set required for job positions such as the ones I’ve applied to in XXXX.

However, the replies I’ve been getting are of no value to me in my career journey. I didn’t get the job position, which is fine. But I would like to get a little bit more feedback as to why. Perhaps you could tell me about the exact areas where the other applicants are ahead of me so I could start taking action.

Looking forward to hearing back from you,

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