I am applying for a job at a local bakery. The owner asked for a resume, portfolio and for a brief introduction of ourselves and why we want to work there. I am having trouble writing it and was hoping someone could give me suggestions on how to fix it up a bit. Thank you for your help in advance.
I am a graduate from the baking and pastry arts program at “insert name here” college and I am e-mailing you in response to your ad looking for a baker/cake decorator.
I am very intrigued by the unique variety of baked goods you offer. I have been baking almost my entire life trying to create new pastries and flavour pairings; however, over the past few years my focus has shifted mainly towards decorating cakes and cupcakes due to the higher demand. I would love to work for your company, as I feel it would give me the opportunity to do both of those things.
I have seven years of customer service experience, I am also very detail oriented and am good at managing my time all while maintaining a positive work environment.
I have attached my resume and portfolio for your review. I can be reached anytime via email at ******@gmail.com and by cell phone, 123-456-7890
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
That’s basically it. I was thinking of writing “in addition to my baking skills I have seven years of customer service...” instead of just starting the paragraph but I’m not sure if it’s necessary.
Also my friend said that I should change the second paragraph. She said when you’re saying I would love to work there because it would provide the opportunity to do both I would try to say something about how you’re looking forward to all the learning opportunities and that you’re excited about furthering your career. Because you say you specialize in decorating but your passion is trying to create new flavours and stuff so I’d try to say something about how working there you’d get to learn more about that while ~honing your skills as a cake decorator or something like that. It’s good to say you wanna do both there because they would want that for sure but I think if you add that you’re saying what you hope to get out of the job as well which I think is good. I’m just not sure how to word that. Once again thank you for all your help.
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